For this section in the UC applications, I have a limit of 240 characters to explain why I want to be in EOP. This is what I thought up of (though it is over the limit) and I want to know if I’m on the right track.
“I am a dependent student from a low-income family. The sheer price of University tuition and many other factors is highly overwhelming and without the EOP program, I cannot afford it all even with an in-campus job. EOP will be highly beneficial for me and my pursuit for a successful future ahead of me.”
Does this sound right?
Please give opinions and suggestions. Thank you!
You hit the nail on the head./
Reasons To Apply For Eop